The grand entrance will yield
Exquisite exit revealed
Choose which door
Dropped to the floor
And to think that it’s all seems a Complete bore….. This life so fake
It makes one wonder if life is to take? At a time of our choosing
And is it really this life that I’m loosing?
These Social niceties….
..These lies…
…This show is exhausting
Wearing these mask
It’s a grueling nightmarish daily task
Surreal Essenes clouds
eyes are heavy, as is the mind
And much of this seems to be a waste of my time
I’m gonna choose this door wisely
With swift conviction I will prepare don’t temp fate not on a dare…
my exit…
Or my entrance
Exquisite , Grandeur
Just be cautious
Tell no one that’s for damn sure
Silence…….
..Leaping into the unknown area
Exiting exquisitely
There, where all suicide tendency subsides
Exquisite exit revealed
Choose which door
Dropped to the floor
And to think that it’s all seems a Complete bore….. This life so fake
It makes one wonder if life is to take? At a time of our choosing
And is it really this life that I’m loosing?
These Social niceties….
..These lies…
…This show is exhausting
Wearing these mask
It’s a grueling nightmarish daily task
Surreal Essenes clouds
eyes are heavy, as is the mind
And much of this seems to be a waste of my time
I’m gonna choose this door wisely
With swift conviction I will prepare don’t temp fate not on a dare…
my exit…
Or my entrance
Exquisite , Grandeur
Just be cautious
Tell no one that’s for damn sure
Silence…….
..Leaping into the unknown area
Exiting exquisitely
There, where all suicide tendency subsides
In this great unknown emptiness that deeply divides~
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Beautifuly written.
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What a wonderfully deep poem. I got chills reading it. You have a rare talent of seeping into the minds of what so many may be feeling. It’s beautiful! Certainly gave me pause to think and I thank you for that. I have been there myself where I feel deflated by the world. I still struggle with it every day. I’m here if you ever need a venting moment. Bless you.😍
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I pray such alarm bells are heeded by those who listen and watch over the ones in this darkness… as the depth of darkness can not be understood by those in the light…
poignant writing🙏
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I just posted a poem entitled “Suicidal Ideations”, guess great minds think alike!
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Wonderfully written…
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I love your work. You are a amazing writer.
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Please read the amazing work of a talented writer.
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Your life is a beautiful thing! Don’t ever forget that!
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Beautiful! Walking me hand in hand through my own tendencies…thank you
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Very powerful. Excellent poem full of deep emotion… that I can completely relate to and I have been there… lived there too many deep dark painful times… Too many times to admit to. I understand those feeling. How are you feeling today? Right now? You can email me if you would prefer. I am here for you and I have been there so I understand and can be an ear and a big loving heart if you want… Hugs, love and blessings. ❤ Sue
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Very powerful. Excellent poem full of deep emotion… that I can completely relate to and I have been there… lived there too many deep dark painful times… Too many times to admit to. I understand those feeling. How are you feeling today? Right now? You can email me if you would prefer. I am here for you and I have been there so I understand and can be an ear and a big living heart if you want… Hugs, love and blessings. <3. Sue
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